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Cheeyev the Fakemon

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Yes, me as a Rock/Fire Fakemon. I was trying to aim for some sort of Fire Fox Desert thing, like Fennkin only completely different, but I failed and I think this looks more like a Coyote or some sort of Kitsune than a Fox. I also like the Rock shell, Turtle, thing. It is part of my Rock type, however, and I did try to aim for a cute and rock type... Maybe this is good and I refuse to believe it since I think I fail at art and this is my first Fakemon design.
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I will not write a critique about it , I do believe it would require a lot more profiency to obtain one .
Although if you have put your heart into it , it is what truly matters .
Now , unlike most of people , I will not be flattering and I will probably not show any empathy .
It does require big improvements , I am not the best drawer ever either but the lines are shaky and too thick ,
it is devoid of shading and lighting so it is too plain likewise .
You should consider proportions as well , the head truly looks too large for no specific reason ,
I mean , I doubt it is part of the design , right ?
As a last term , try to find inspiration , it is a little ... too dull for a pokemon .
Go crazy ! Let the colors and shape burst out . Mix species , turn objects into living critters and what not.

Anyway , I noticed that you have slightly improved since then , and I do believe you will still .
Perhaps are you still young therefore I do think it will look better in a few years if you keep working on it ,
because without any work , your drawing skills will not get any better than that .